Composition 2



   Another composition I made




“Ughhh how awful those wilted flowers look,” Tracy said in disgust “Get me new ones!” 

Tracy is one horribly spoiled girl who lives with her parents and orders people around to get her job done. All those working for her would stay for about 1 month or less but then they would start to feel irritated and annoyed and make her find new workers. Clearly, she knows nothing about managing nor spending her parents' money. Yet, she thinks everything will workout smoothly with her family's pockets filled. 

She assumed that nothing can get really ugly until one day her father passed away. Debt collectors came to their house and confiscated things in the house. A whole deja vu. Her father owes other people quite big costs. Tracy hated the sight. Feeling that she is losing everything in a minute, she started kicking and throwing her arms in the air, screaming frustratedly. She told them that her father would never owe anything to anyone and that these things in the house belongs to her. But who would listen to a little kid like her. 

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  1. Alyssa, again, please be more consitent with V1 and V2. This disturbs the flow.

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