KPI( Kebeaktian Penyegaran iman)
KPI
On
the 16th of February 2016, we didn't have regular lessons at school. Instead,
we go to church to worship the Lord. There our faith is freshened. The pastor
told us things, this and that. Honestly, I felt quite bored with that long
speech of hers, but well at least it is better than school. First of
all we are allowed to bring our phones while we aren't allowed to bring
our phones at regular classes. Second, we are dismissed early.
So
the day went like this. First we sang some songs. Then the pastor told us this
and that. She even told us things that made most of us burst into tears, ask
for forgiveness from those we talk about behind their backs, and some more (I
don't remember). We ended the worship with a couple of songs and then exchange
bookmarks that we made ourselves with bookmarks others made.
I think you did a nice job but there are several tenses mistakes, I think you should watch and be careful with your tenses and grammar :)
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you are very honest about how you feeling in the event. Overall, I think it is an excellent job! ^^
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